Donnerstag, 21. Januar 2010

homework*

Letter:

Dear Lisa,


so first i want to know how you are doing and what you are doing all the time.
I´ve got some new news about the school. I had a maths test which decides if i get an 2 in the final grad in the school report i hope i did well. But i still have problems in physics so i will have a bad mark in that subject. All in i´m happy about my school achievement.
Soon we will have a sportweek in april it will be great fun. We can learn different sports like golf ,kayak or climbing it will be very interresting. The sportweek will takes place in salzburg its a big city and in the evenings we will be allowed to spent our free-time there.
One last thing. Do you remember my best friend Sophie? Well she had a break with Lukas her boyfriend after 1 year relation but now they are together again. I´m really happy about that.
I hope you write back as soon as you can too inform me about your live. I miss you and i´m looking forward to see you in the next holidays.
Yours,
Kim

1 Kommentar:

Guenter hat gesagt…

sp:I (not 'i')
g: a two (2)
exp: to get a 2 as a mid-term mark
str: I hope I did well. (a new sentence!)
exp: I will get a bad mark ...
exp: all in all
sp: April
str: You don't start new sentences when you should do so.
g: (it) will take place ...
str: (Salzburg) which is a big city
g: to spend
exp: she broke up with Lukas, her boyfriend, after going out with him for a year
t: I hope you'll write back ...
sp: to inform
sp/exp: about your life
g: I'm looking forward to seeing you ...