Homework*
When I come home from school sometimes I am fed up with all homewoks that we get. I mostly do the homeworks after eating at midday. Then I´ve got the whole afternoon for myself. After the homework and the learning I do something with my friends for example going to bregenz. There I can relax and forget all the stress that I had before. It´s always funny with them. When I´m back home I often listen to music so I can repose and think about everything that happened in my day. Everyday I try to go early to bed but it doesn´t work all time. So in the morning I am tired and not rested. So I can´t always be as attentiv as I should be to notice everything my teachers say. But when I´m tired, I can´t be concentrated on my work. But when I have a test it´s important to be well-rested and attentive. So if I would be, my marks would probably be better.
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sp: homework
Really you should only use 'homework' in singular. You can use "home assignments" in plural.
exp: repose --> relax (better), wind down, unwind, ...
str: try to go to bed early
sp: attentive
exp: to mentally follow everything that the teacher says
'But' is wrong here, because it's not a contrast: This means when I'm tired, I can't ...
exp: So if I followed my own advice, my marks would probably be better.
Your text is a bit incoherent (unzusammenhängend). You don't use 'but' correctly. Your vocabulary tends to be a bit limited. You do use some more common conjunctions however.
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